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> Soul Masters, From roleplay to fanfic
Lucar-tron
post 21 October 2008, 20:56
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Beginning.

"It's over now. Why don't you give up when you still have the chance?" asked a red robot with a blue face and mouthplate, blue legs and arms another robot that's gray bodied, but with black waist and legs and a red head with a grey menacing face.
"Never. Conquering Cybertron is too big for a goal to just give up." said the grey robot.
"I had hoped that we could settle it peacefully Megatron, but it seems that we have to finnish it the violent way." said the red robot.
"You should know Optimus, that the violent way is the only good way!" said Megatron and punched Optimus on the chest.
Optimus then kicked Megatron on the side of his waist and made him fall, but then Megatron rose up and transformes into a jet and rammed Optimus.
Optimus then picked up a gun and shot down Megatron to the ground and then went to him.
"I never thought that someone like you should play dirty." said Megatron with a rasping voice like if he was so damaged that he could die.
"I didn't... untill you started to play dirty yourself. One last warning, give up!" said Optimus.
"I rather go offline for all eternity than give up." said Megatron still with a rasping voice, but he was squeling. "For you wouldn't want to kill your friend?"
"I'm trying to avoid that." said Optimus sighing and then pointed his gun against Megatrons head. "But after all that time fighting, so have you lost the rights to be considered my friend."
Megatron was shocked over the fact that Optimus was going to shoot him.
"Please, I beg you, I give up!!" shouted Megatron.
"Sorry, but you should have configured that out before." said Optimus and pulled the trigger on his gun. It was a quite moment untill all the Autobots cheered for the great victory and for the great peace to come.

The two races of Autobots and Decepticons have been at war in miljon of years untill the day when Optimus Prime, leader of the Autobots finished of the leader of the Decepticons, Megatron and it was peace in 400 years untill one day... A red and gray Decepticon named Starscream who was believed to be destroyed in the last war came forth and took the leadership of the Decepticons, but they didn't start a new war... yet.
"Autobots! Prepare to defend our home of Cybertron from future attack!" shouted Optimus to all Autobots and everybody began to prepare.
But Starscream wasn't interested in Cybertron. Instead he and his Decepticons had their eyes set on earth for the energy resources there.

On Earth so was there a white Autobot with front window on his chest, red crosses on his shoulders, red waist and a red insignea on his head named Ratchet training two Autobot trainees named Nightbird and Grimlock. Nightbird is a robot with dark gray body, with black hands and boots, purple face plate, wings that looks like a splitted helicopter tail and helicopter blades hanging on her back as swords, she has a femenine figure too.
Grimlock is big and muscular coloured in dark gray with a golden chest plate, a black head with eyes that looks like blue shades and golden claws.
Suddenly a distress signal arrived on the computer that they had. Ratchet answered it.
"Ratchet here! What's your status?"
"This is Optimus Prime. I have a direct order for you." said Optimus.
"What is it my friend?" asked Ratchet.
"I want you and your trainees to await for us. Have you found a good place to land?" asked Optimus.
"Yes, sir! I'm sending the coordinates to you now." said Ratchet.
"Good. Prime over and out." said Prime and turned of.

Later so were the Autobots outside and awaited their leader and his cohorts, but suddenly a missile came right for them, they avoided it and saw the one shooting it flying down. A blue F-22 raptor.
"Thundercracker, transform!" said the plane and transformed into a blue and gray robot with a blue head.
"What is that?" asked Nightbird.
"That's probably a Decepticon. Everybody we have to fight!" said Ratchet and they all grabbed their weapons.
At the same time so was a man named Hector togheter with his sons, José and Valiant on a hike nearby. They heard something and looked it up and saw the robots fighting.
"Wow, this is so cool." said José, who was the younger one.
"Yeah, but maybe we should go away." said Valiant who was the older one.
"Aggreed my son." said Hector.
"Thundercracker was shooting another missile, this time against Nightbird, but she dodged it and unfortunaly so did it hit the place where Hector and his boys was at. The explosion was so big that Hector and the boys flew away by it. Hector was just fine, but he noticed that his sons are missing.
Searching through, he found José badly damaged.
"José! José! Say something!" said Hector desperate but didn't get a response from him.
"He is still living, but not for a long time." said Ratchet who just scanned the boy.
"I've tried to find the other boy, but I couldn't find him. If I didn't dodge that projectile, you would have been safe and sound." said Nightbird depressed.
"Who cares. He was probably that weak to get completely destroyed by that explosion." said Grimlock, but then he got a kick right at his back of his head by Nightbird.
"We have no time to bawble, we have a human to rescue and I know how." said Ratchet and transformed into an ambulance.
"How?" asked Hector as he lifted José inside Ratchet.
"We'll transfer his soul to an Autobot protoform so that his body can be repaired without risking his life." said Ratchet.

At the nearest city so did they get to a hospital so that they could take José. Ratchet used a machine that extracted his soul into a capsule.
"Now I'm sure that my son will be safe, but I can't stop worrying about Valiant." said Hector.
"I know how you feel. Let us just hope that he is alright wherever he is." said Ratchet.

At the Decepticons headquarters, so were Starscream and Thundercracker next to a chamber who just opened.
"Ah, welcome from your first steps outside of the protoform chambers." said Starscream to an orange transformers with a skull with a samurai helmet on and an armcanon on his right arm.
"(I hope that I did the right thing.)" thought Thundercracker and looked at the new Decepticon.

To be continued...
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I thought that because my roleplay didn't seem to be succesfull so have I decided that I should make it into a fanfiction. And what better place to post it than... here (maybe I could have posted it on fanfiction.net, but I think it is better to post it here).
But you can send me pms about some characters that you have made up and wants to see in this fic.

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post 22 October 2008, 19:25
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A new body.


"So tell me, what's your name?" asked Starscream the new Decepticon.
"My name is Bludgeon. What can I do for you master?" asked the new Decepticon.
"Ooh, I think I'm going to like having him... as my left hand." said Starscream.
Thundercracker went next to Bludgeon and patted Bludgeon on his shoulder.
"So are you really named Bludgeon, or is it a new name you have adopted for your new body?" asked Thundercracker.
"What are you talking about?" asked Bludgeon and grabbed Thundercracker's arm.
Before Thundercracker could react so was he thrown away by Bludgeon into a wall.
"Oww... Is this how you humans thanks the one saving them?" asked Thundercracker angry.
"I have no idéa what a human is, and how should I remember something about you when I was just a protoform." said Bludgeon and ejected an energon sword out of his canon in front of Thundercracker.
"Thundercracker is usually not an idiot, but strangely he is." said Starscream and took Bludgeon on a tour around the Decepticon base.

On earth so is Ratchet transfering the soul of José into a spark-less protoform.
"Are you really sure that this will be safe?" asked Hector.
"I hope so. If not, then I have unfolded our existence in vain." said Ratchet.
"What Ratchet mean?" asked Grimlock.
"If this transfer would fail, so would all living beings on this planet hate us." said Ratchet as he watched the status of the transfer.
"Why would humans hate us? If that boy dies, so is he dead." said Grimlock, but then he got punched right on his face by Nightbird.
"Maybe you should think about matters a little." said Nightbird.
"Why Grimlock does have to feel pity for something weaker than him?" asked Grimlock angriely as pretended not to feel the punch.
"Can you two be quite!" shouted Ratchet and the two trainees was emediatly quite.
Suddenly sparks began to flew from the transfering machine and it was going to explode. Everybody covered for defence as the machine exploded.
When they got up to see what happened, so did they see an all new Autobot sitting there where the protoform was. It was blue with yellow feets and hands, red waist and a black head with a yellow tiara on its forehead.
Hector crept closer to the robot and the robot saw the man and smile came on its face.
"José?" asked Hector worried.
"Daddy! I thought that I was going to die." said José and reached his hands so that he could hug his father, but then notices that his arms looked different.
"Why are my arms so big and metallic looking? By the way, why do you look like you are smaller daddy?" asked José.
"That is because your soul is in a new body while your old normal body is in hospital baing operated." said Hector as calm as he could.
"Which means that for the moment, you are an Autobot." said Ratchet.
José looked around to see if there are a mirror, but the only thing he could find that worked as a mirror was reflective paintjob on Grimlock. He looked into his reflection on it and became shocked.
"You afraid of me Grimlock?" asked Grimlock.
"N... no. It is just that... that... I am a robot now and... it is the..." said José stammering.
"Most scaring moment you ever had?" guessed Nightbird.
"Heck no! The most awesome moment in my life!" shouted José hotblooded.
"Well, if you think that, maybe you should be get used to your new body before Optimus Prime, the supreme leader of Autobots come." said Ratchet.
"But can I transform?" asked José.
"Not get. You have to find a suitable alt. mode first." said Nightbird.

Nightbird and José began searching on the computer for alt. modes and came across a Toyota Camry, that was the one thing that José wants and downloaded it. Then he got wheels on his shoulders and legs with the rooftop of a car on his back.
Then he got led to alot of other trainings like brawling, where he was easily beaten down by Grimlock, even tough he made his best.
"You're weakling. Get out of my sight." said Grimlock madly.
"Is he always like that?" asked José Nightbird.
"Yes, ever since he was a protoform, but then I think that he was quite." said Nightbird and held for laughter.
The next training was racing and getting used to his alt. mode. He was quite good, but had hard to turn in curves.
Then he was shooting with guns and he got bulls eye on every target.
"At least something I'm great at." said José happy.

Then was everybody outside of their base and saw a big space ship land infront of them and out of it came some Autobots and then Optimus Prime. He walked to the trainees and inspected them. Then he began to ask them all a question.
"What are your names?" asked Optimus.
"I'm Nightbird, the flying ninja." said Nightbird.
"Me Grimlock." said Grimlock.
"(I can't say José. That's too human and uncool. Think, think.)" thought José untill he remembered his good shooting skill. "Sureshot, sir!"
Nightbird, Grimlock and Ratchet looked at José with strange eyes.
"Ratchet, you have some fine trainees here that surely could become great heroes." said Optimus.
"No, me Grimlock not become. Me Grimlock will!" said Grimlock.
"Not as long as you are an arse." said José now going to be called Sureshot.
"Me Grimlock no arse... whatever an arse is." said Grimlock but then he realized that it was meant to mean something bad, so he transformed into his T-rex alt. mode and began hunting Sureshot, who transformed into his car mode.
"It seems that your not just an arse, but you are stupid. C´mon, who chooses a dinosaur as an alternative mode?" asked Sureshot retorically.
"Dinosaurs are mighty, and therefor me Grimlock chose it." answered Grimlock still hunting down Sureshot.
"It was actually a retorical question, but now I know that you really are that dumb as to not know that dinosaurs are extinct." said Sureshot.
Grimlock roared with anger as he went faster, but so did Sureshot too, until Nightbird came in her alt. mode that is a Kaman K-MAX helicopter and then transformed back to robot mode to throw her swords in front of Grimlock and Sureshot.
"Seems like there's only one good trainee." said Optimus.
"I'm sorry Prime that it is so. Grimlock was like that since the day he became an Autobot and Jo... Sureshot is newer than them." said Ratchet.
"Hm... I can fargive you and your trainees, but you have to remember theese two boys to work togheter." said Optimus as he and Ratchet saw Nightbird trying her best to calm them down.

To be continued...
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Lucar-tron
post 27 October 2008, 21:17
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Enemies.


After everything settled down, so were Sureshot and Grimlock diseplined by Optimus Prime and Ratchet. The two young Autobots felt ashamed over this and begged for forgiveness.
"I whould forgive you, but I don't think that only that will help. You need special training." said Optimus.
"Before that, could I take a tour and escort our... new ally?" asked Sureshot.
Optimus looked at Sureshot a bit puzzled.
"Well... some humans discovered us while we fought with one of the Decepticons which lead to things like me saving a human life from near death, and that at the cost of my idendity." said Ratchet.
"We will have a talk about this right now and for you, Sureshot so do you got my allowance to escort our new "ally" to where it belong, but don't do anything reckless. I don't want anything bad to happen to a young bot like you." said Optimus.
"Thanks... sir!" said Sureshot and transformed into a a Toyota Camry and drove through the base and picked up Hector. Then they went of out of base.

At the same time so was Starscream and Bludgeon in a computer room and Bludgeon was choosing for an alternative mode.
"All the Autobots are land vehicles, so therefor so are the best choice to take an aireal vehicles." said Starscream.
"I wouldn't like to complain because that's against my honour, but it will be against my honour to take an aireal form." said Bludgeon.
"Do you question my geanius thinking?" asked Starscream enraged.
"No, of course not, I just want to test the limit of my opponents by being a land vehicle." said Bludgeon and saw an M1 Abrams. "This will do." said Bludgeon and scanned it.
"Now that you are done with scanning it, maybe you should try it out." said Starscream.
"Yes, as you command lord Starscream." said Bludgeon.

Back at earth so was Sureshot driving Hector on a highway calmly.
"Why do you put so much trouble my son." asked Hector.
"Because that I care about my own daddy and that when I'm so big, so do I have to be good to those smaller." said Sureshot.
"I mean that I already got a car, so it was unneccesary for you to drive me." said Hector.
"Uhm... well... atleast so do I get to drive in the open." said Sureshot.
"Hmm... you haven't chaned a bit I see." said Hector and then startled as he saw a tank driving on the way.
"Are tanks supposed to drive here?" asked Sureshot.
"I don't know José, but best if you are quiet." said Hector.
"OK, but please call me Sureshot next time." said Sureshot.
The tank crept closer to Sureshot and then he passed by the tank, so did the tank turn around and followed Sureshot.
"What's with this tank?" asked Hector.
"Stop there! Can you tell me where the Autobot base are?" asked the tank.
Sureshot braked, for both him and his dad was surprised over the tank knowing about the Autobot base.
"Speak to me, lowly lifeforms!" shouted the tank and then transformed into the Decepticon Bludgeon.
"Who are you?" asked Sureshot.
"I'm lord Starscreams most loyal and the newest warrior of the Decepticons, Bludgeon." said Bludgeon as an energon sword ejected from his arm canon.
"Whoah, I would like to fight, but my orders is to only take my dad... I mean this human to his home." said Sureshot.
"Dad? What's that?" asked Bludgeon as Sureshot used full gas to get away. "Don't think you will get away!" screamed Bludgeon angry and transformed into his tank mode to follow Sureshot.
"Oh, no that ugly Decepticreep is following us." said Sureshot. "Hold tight daddy!"
"Sure." said Hector and fasten the seatbelt more tightly and held the seat as Sureshot went faster.
But Bludgeon was still after Sureshot and angrier. He even began to shoot after him.
"Sureshot!" was a voice similiar to Nightbirds calling to Sureshot.
"Nightbird? Where are you?" asked Sureshot.
"I'm talking to you via comlink. What's your status?" asked Nightbird.
"Bad. I'm followed by a Decepticon who wants to kill me and dad." said Sureshot.
"That doesn't sound good. Wait, I'll call Optimus." said Nightbird and then so was Optimus voice heard.
"Sureshot, we will come as fast as we can to your coordinates, but if we doesn't come in 2 astrocycles so do you have to engage the Decepticon." said Optimus.
"Good, but how long is an astrocycle?" asked Sureshot.
"Like one minute, if I understand the systems here on earth right." said Nightbird.
"Ok. Sureshot over and out!" said Sureshot as one of the projectiles nearly hit Sureshot.
The chase was still on in one and a half minute, but no sign of reinforcement.
"I can't stand it." said Sureshot and was going to transform until Hector told him to wait a little bit longer.
"What's with you scared?" asked Bludgeon. "If you are a warrior, then stand and fight!"
"One thing for sure is that I'm not scared." said Sureshot as he transformed and held his dad with his hand. He then let Hector go to safety.
"That's more like it. Show me your best move." said Bludgeon as he transformed into robot mode and the two transformers clashed into battle.

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Lucar-tron
post 3 November 2008, 13:57
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The rivalry begins.


They looked at each others in a five seconds and then so drew Bludgeon his sword against Sureshot, but Sureshot dodged it in the last second and then kicked Bludgeon on the stomach. Bludgeon then grabbed Sureshots troath and lifted him up in the air.
"Are all Autobots like that?" asked Bludgeon and was then going to stab Sureshot with his sword until rescue came in the form of a truck with trailer, a helicopter, an ambulance and a green Jeep Wrangler Unlimited Rubicon who later transformed into Optimus Prime, Nightbird, Ratchet and a robot with the car front as cheast, grey legs with green feet, green arms, a green helmet and a dark grey face which looks like it got black shades as eyes and a short black moustash under his nose and a grin under it. It seems that he got a drill on his right shoulder.
"Let that Autobot trainee go!" shouted the green robot.
"Oh, you say that he is just a trainee? Well, I'm a trainee too and I'm proof too that we Decepticons are better than Autobots." said Bludgeon.
"I don't think so!" said Nightbird. "Optimus, what's your orders?"
"Me and Drill Bit will attack the Decepticon while you and Ratchet will take Sureshot and Hector to safety." said Optimus.
"Right!" said Nightbird and Ratchet.
"Let's show that brat how good we Autobots are!" said the green robot who is reffered as Drill Bit.
Optimus picked up his gun and began to shoot Bludgeon, but he deflected it with his sword. But he wasn't reasy for Drill Bit who used a tranquilizer gun on the arm that held Sureshot so that Sureshot was free.
"Thanks guys, now let me finnish it." said Sureshot.
"No kid, let Prime and Drill Bit do it." said Ratchet and grabbed Sureshot.
"But... he picked on me." said Sureshot.
"José, listen to Ratchet. You will probably need more training before facing the likes of him." said Hector.
Sureshot watched as Optimus and Drill Bit blasted on against Bludgeon, but he moved so fast and then he slashed Optimus's arm.
Sureshot then took Ratchets hand and made it let go of his arm so that he could run in into Bludgeon.
"KID!" shouted Ratchet.
"JOSÉ!" shouted Hector.
"You will get killed Sureshot!" said Nightbird.
"I don't care about that. I fight for my friends!" said Sureshot and then kicked down Bludgeon.
He then picked up a gun and shot at Bludgeon untill Bludgeon didn't have enough energy to move.
"Come on finnish me." said Bludgeon.
"I don't know, I'm just a weakling." said Sureshot.
"I had wrong. You showed your lojalty for your superiors and you did fell me, so I deem you a strong opponent. Now finnish me." said Bludgeon.
Sureshot was thinking of shooting, but he felt that he couldn't do that.
"Sorry, but I can't destroy someone who don't have a will to fight." said Sureshot, then he noticed a jet flying down and picked up Bludgeon.
"Thundercracker again? What are the Decepticons up to?" asked Nightbird.
"I don't know, but I have something to talk about to Sureshot." said Optimus.

At the Decepticons headquarters.
"You engaged an Autobot, but failed in destroying it?" asked Starscream.
"Yes, but other Autobots came and intervined, but we still had our fight." said Bludgeon.
"Who?" asked Starscream.
"An Autobot trainee named Sureshot." said Bludgeon.
"A trainee!?" asked Starscream furiously. "How can I accieve my goals if my Decepticons can't defeat some Autobots?"
"You could always send some more than just one Decepticon to fight." said Thundercracker.
"That sounds like a good idéa. I will call all my Decepticon warriors now!" said Starscream.
Thundercracker and Bludgeon went outside to wait for the other Decepticons to come.
"Think that I saved you again." said Thundercracker.
"What are you talking about?" asked Bludgeon. "You only saved me this time, and I will never thank you for doing that."
Thundercracker felt that he had to do something about Bludgeon, because he knew that Starscream did something against him.

At the Autobot headquarters so are Optimus and Sureshot talking to each others while Grimlock was outside and listened to their conversation.
"(Hehe. Me Grimlock hopes that he Sureshot will get scolded really well.)" thought Grimlock.
"What's so funny?" asked Nightbird and startled Grimlock.
"Nothing... it's nothing that someone like you should care about." said Grimlock and then he noticed that the door opened and Optimus and Sureshot came out.
"Take some energon snacks as reward and promise to not jump in into danger again." said Optimus.
"Yes, sir!" said Sureshot and then tasted the energon snacks he got.
"Good to hear." said Optimus and went in.
"Why you Sureshot got energon for?" asked Grimlock.
"I should probably share one with you, but I won't because you didn't come to my rescue." said Sureshot and gave one to Nightbird.
"Why... you!" shouted Grimlock and jumped on Sureshot and they both began brawling eachothers.
Inside Optimus room, so did he look at a holopicture with him and Megatron, but they seemed to act more friendly to each others.
"I hope that those kids will not get the same destiny as I did." said Optimus and sighed sadly.

To be continued...
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post 10 November 2008, 21:05
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Predators.


Starscream sat at his throne waiting for the other Decepticons to come. Bludgeon and Thundercracker held an eye for them untill some of them finally come. It was a dark blue F-35 Lightning II stealth plane, a black and purple B-2 Spirit, which seems to got a big turret under it and a gray Eurofighter Typhoon with purple stripes.
"Seems that the Predators are first here." said Thundercracker.
"And they are... ?" asked Bludgeon.
"They are the most elite of the Decepticons." said Thundercracker.
The dark blue stealth plane then transformed so that the nose and the front half becomes the legs, while two bronze arms sticks out from the underside, the wings folds togheter and then it landed and stood up, after that so did a head pop up which was black with three tips on the forehead, green eyes and have a bronze faceplate.
"Skyquake's here." said the transformed stealth.
Then so did the black/purple stealth transform. The arms who where hidden in the body unfolded, the wings folded togheter to become legs, the canon was placed on the right shoulder where next to it a white head pops out with orange eyes and purple cables coming into the mouth from the cheeks, which makes it look like a pilot helmet.
"BB reports! Roger." said the other stealth.
Then the Typhoon transformed with the engines changing to legs, the nose folded down and two light blue arms unfolds from the Typhoon and the right hand holds a missile looking gun. The head of this one was grey with a black stripe around its forehead, red eyes and a white face.
"Cheerio chaps! Fireflight here." said the third robot.
"We came as fast as we could when we heard Starscream calling us." said Skyquake.
"Starscream is waiting right here in this room." said Thundercracker and pointed to Starscreams room.
Skyquake just shoved off Thundercracker off the way.
"Come here BB. Starscream can't be waiting all day." said Fireflight.
"Roger!" said BB and went togheter with Fireflight inside.
"Are all Decepticons like this?" asked Bludgeon. "Then I have to be lord Starscreams best soldier."

Suddenly so came a small Decepticon jumping in. He was green with black arms and legs, having a head which looked almost like a grasshoppers head, but with a human mouth.
"Who are you?" asked Bludgeon while looking down at the small Decepticon.
"Hey, don't look at me cuz' I'm small. I can put on a real kick on you." said the small Decepticon.
"You seem to have an attitude problem kid." said Bludgeon.
"You got no right to call me kid cuz' I'm small, and I heard you where just created from your protoform yesterday." said the Decepticon.
"Can you just tell me your name. My name is Bludgeon."
"The name's Kickback, and remember it, cuz' it will be the last thing you will remember if you ever crosses my way." said the small Decepticon and went in to Starscream.
"Maybe we should go to Starscream now." said Thundercracker.

Starscream wasn't pleased that these was all the Decepticons that came.
"You should probably have putten more manner into your men, but no! You have to be nice to them." said Skyquake with a disgusted look.
Bludgeon unfolded his sword and held it close to Skyquakes throat.
"Good job Bludgeon for showing that ones place." said Starscream. "But now for why I called you here. The Autobots are on Earth now and are probably going to ruinate our plans."
"Let's kick their sorry backs." said Kickback.
"It isn't that easy as you think. We need a strategy if we are going to beat them." said Starscream.
"Let me and my chaps do it, Starscream." said Fireflight.
"NO! I'm the leader and therefor the brain. So I'm the one giving out the plans!" said Starscream and punched Fireflight.
"This is my strategy!" said Starscream and begins to tell it to everybody.
"(You are just being egoistic and stupid Starscream. You can never truly be a real evil mastermind.)" thought Skyquake and looked hatefully at Starscream. "(We can just hope that this idéa is any good.)"

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post 31 January 2009, 15:54
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Alexander Mars
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Thank you so much. smile.gif Just now so am I a little dry on ideas, but I hope I will be able to continue with it.
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post 27 February 2009, 00:32
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I think it was really nice and I'm looking forward to the next part! smile.gif
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